About

I could have written a good book about the nine years to date that I have battled Mesothelioma, but I thought maybe a good fiction novel would be a way to bring in funds for a much needed cause. We need funds to find a cure for this cancer that leaves no one standing.

Each of The Dreamweaver's Choice is donated to the Charity of MFMRF, I have taken nothing, paid for all printing and artwork costs myself. I do hope that in time many books will be sold and if possible the charity will keep receiving funds from the sales long after I have gone.

I just need you the public to get behind this book and buy it for young family members. Yes it has vampires, not many nasty ones but enough to give the book a story of good vs bad. There's a Newfoundland Dog, a paranormal police woman, a ghost and a couple of really good looking guys. What is there not to like?

It isn't a horror with lots of killing but a good story where good outwits evil, a good read along the way with some interesting twists.

Please get behind us and support the charity, at the same time you may even enjoy the read.

Tuesday, 21 May 2013

Mixed Reviews

When I  started The DreamWeaver's Choice I sent the first 6 or 8 chapters to Liz to see what she thought, she was the one who encouraged me to carry on and waiting daily for the next chapter to arrive.  Once I had completed the whole manuscript we then proof read and I changed the corrections, added a few bits in then passed it around to a couple of my friends and she a couple of hers.  The feed back was really good but I listened to one that said I needed to explain more up front about who the characters were.
 
I  adjusted the first six chapters taking the mystery away from what the characters and allowing them to grow slowly instead  I gave full descriptions up front making Chapters 1 to 3 quite full on and all suspense dissipated
 
From the feed back I have received todate it seems I should have left things stand, but being naïve and my first ever full 140,000 word manuscript thought someone with a degree would be right.
 
Nearly everyone I know has struggled with the opening chapters but once through have found the book a good read.
 
I wish when I had changed the opening chapters I had sent it back out for readings and opinions but I can't do anything about it now.
 
So if you are reading the book and would like to make a comment please feel free to do so, feed back is what every one wants when they first start out on a new journey.  It may also help or put off some one else from reading it.
 
As per The Vial of Darkness, because you know the characters this should be an easy read, one review so far on the draft is Explosive.
 
 
 
 

Thursday, 16 May 2013

Available from your bookshop

Have just realised you can order The DreamWeaver's Choice from your book shop, all you need is the title.  Any queries the ISBN No is 978-0-9576071-0-1.

I was due to take 250 books up to Mick Knighton Mesothelioma Research Fund's HQ today and catch up with Chris Knighton but due to having difficulties putting my foot on the ground, I have had to put this back.

Liz, my proof reader, has been out selling the books - everyone she meets at her gym, local store etc.  She is amazing as well as contacting one of the local news papers and has arranged an interview regarding the book and the reasons for publishing.

Onward and upwards, but I would like to say a special thanks to those out there who have not only purchased it on Kindle but have also bought the paperback too.

I must admit writing is a joy but editing and publishing does take the fun away, if I hadn't decided to do it for the charity I'm not sure I would have gone this far.

Thursday, 9 May 2013

Printed Book Arrival

Excitement mounted in our household this morning when the delivery of my first printed book arrived.


As we have guest's I had to do my first book signing, wow do you know how hard it is to think of something to write inside.

Sunday, 14 April 2013

Chapter Five


Amelia pushed Hugh back into the sofa and cuddled up next to him, wanting to feel his body close to hers, it wasn’t a sin as they were man and wife but had never been able to celebrate the occasion in the traditional way.  She had died a virgin bride and it seemed like it would remain that way, the intimacy of lovemaking being something neither of them will ever know.

Hugh felt her body through the cotton dress, he felt an urge of human desire sweep across his whole being.  He pulled her tight against him wanting nothing more than to slowly undress her, kiss her ripe body and for them to feel the pleasure of each other.  He let his mind wander to what he would do, imagining her soft flesh under his touch.  As his mind was dreaming he felt something else trying to break into his thoughts, darkness, a terrible pit of darkness.

Amelia too was imagining the touch of his hand but felt him pulling away from her, she lifted her head and saw that his eyes were closed.  Thinking he had fallen asleep she laid her head on his chest and closed her eyes.  If possible she would stay with him while he slept and hopefully still be here when he awoke.

Friday, 12 April 2013

Feed back

Hi All,

I have heard from a couple that the first couple of chapters are hard work, but then aren't all great books that way!!!!

The first few chapters are introducing you to the characters and what TransNormal, DreamWeaver, Shadow Watchers and Creepers mean.  I have tried to bring something different to the world of vampire books by adding in the paranormal and good spirits that we all wish to believe in.

If you have read the book, I would love some feed back on the comments you can leave on this site.

In the meantime thank you to those who have bought it, the printed copy will be available soon for those who don't wish to use a kindle or ipad.

Sunday, 7 April 2013

Chapter Four Extract


Abe probed Hugh’s mind to see what he was thinking, his quietness was driving him crazy. Normally they would be chatting and joking during a journey.  Amelia would often be with them and once they were in the location she would do her thing and using her spirit form to pinpoint the Mark.  She would tell them whether he was acting dangerously.   As he probed into Hugh’s mind he found him thinking about one of their earlier escapades.

The Ball was drawing to a close, the air outside still humid and heavy from the heat of the day.  A storm was brewing as the clouds began pulling together, the sound of slow rumbling thunder in the distance.  Several of the guests were already gathering outside the main entrance waiting for their carriages to draw up, the music still audible from the ball room.  Abe was now hiding in the shadows cast by the fountain watching for the Vampires they had followed that evening and who were now departing. 

Having spent an hour mingling with the guests Abe had chosen the Vampires who were planning on feasting from the ladies they had escorted that evening.  It was a dangerous environment for either Hugh or Abe to be in, especially Hugh.  If he was ever discovered by the Coven of Vampires that assembled at these grand occasions he would suffer terribly before being killed.

Hugh had already taken the place of the driver, knocking him unconscious after feeding him bottles of ale and stripping him of his livery.  He kept his face down, his liveried hat tilted to keep his identity hidden. 

On Abe’s signal he gently brought the Clarence to a stop at the front door.  The party of four moved forward to Hugh’s carriage Abe whistled to Hugh that the party were ready to board.  Once the party were seated Hugh led the horses at a slow trot around the large courtyard so Abe could jump onto the back plate without being seen.  Once Abe had managed to take a secure hold Hugh put the horses into canter until they were off the estate and a few miles down the quiet lane.  Through earlier experiences the Vampires usually waited until they had the females in their homes before attacking them, but these Vampires were different. From Hugh’s seat he could hear the laughter and chatter die down, he knew that the Vampires had started their attack on the victims.  He took the decision to take them there and then so he whistled to Abe.  As Hugh pulled the horses to a stop Abe carefully made his way on to the top of the carriage.

With the unexpected stopping of the carriage one of the Vampires banged on the roof a couple of times demanding to know the reason why. When he received no response he alighted the carriage.  Just as he stepped out of the coach Abe jumped onto him, his knife in hand.  He took the man down and forced the blade directly into his heart.  One down one to go.  Hugh drew his sword, his fangs exposed as his temper fired.  He pulled open the carriage door, seeing the blood dripping from an open wound on one of the ladies necks, his temper flared.  The remaining Vampire taken by surprise leapt from his seat, discarding the woman like a rag doll to his side, his fangs covered in her fresh blood.  Hugh’s sword struck him hard taking his head from his shoulders.  Neither Hugh nor Abe had expected the Vampires to have commenced feasting and were now left with two young victims.  They had to make a decision there and then, change them or kill them.  The bodies of the Vampires already turned to ash mixing with the mud on the lane.

Saturday, 6 April 2013

Short Stories and The Vial of Darkness

Have just finished draft one of the new book, as I am proof reading this one, which is so boring, I was thinking about doing a run of short stories on just Bear and Lauri.

I will post them on here in the hope that the few who visit this blog will enjoy the quick read, if I get even more computer literate I could maybe load them as pdf so you can download to read!

The DreamWeaver's Choice has sold 9 in the uk, I have finally sent the last draft to the printers and hopefully the book will be printed in a few weeks.  I know many people don't have a kindle so hoping this will get them out there.

Chris Knighton will be promoting them too.  Although I have enjoyed writing the books I do hope people will buy it, nothing is nicer than sharing.  Especially when you can be taken into a world that isn't your own, and the profit from the book is for a good cause.

Please leave comments about whether you would like short stories, feed back is something we all need.